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happiness
February 2009 
unfinished
Posted on Jul 29th, 2008
by 
Mila
Mila
I wrote the first faint line,
faint, without substance, pure
nonsense,/pure wisdom
of someone who knows nothing - pablo neruda, Poetry Arrived
never before have I written words for one woman,
preferring instead to say I'm 'inspired by'
those I love and have loved before.
but here is the muse who led me to poetry,
(for whom I wrote my first faint lines)
sharing again how easy it is to be happy.
so I choose to leave this work unfinished,
to live each inspired moment, a new verse,
ecstatic.
- July 29, 2008
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i can't put my finger on it, but there is something about this i really like.
the simple minded me would've ended with ” a new verse,”
but i think your ending is more poignant for not doing so.
anyway, i feel like i'm intruding; but that's how i roll.